Some things of the heart... some things of the mind ...
How sad.. poignant poem...lovely write
The look that doesn't see - heartwrenching.
Beautifully sad! Well done!http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/30/wax-candy-lips/
this is fun, smart metaphor, wow.
Thank you, everyone !!!
A great metaphor, nicely done
Magnificent as always. You do such an excellent job at conveying the emotion in your poems! The first two lines were my favorite.