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Monday, 31 October 2011

Fallen Star


You're like a night star
a much too bright star
I'm like a lonely light
in the corner of your eye
you look straight at me
and I disappear..
O love, was I never there?


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7 comments:

  1. Susie Clevenger31 October 2011 at 11:22

    How sad.. poignant poem...lovely write

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  2. Altonian31 October 2011 at 22:57

    The look that doesn't see - heartwrenching.

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  3. Marbles in My Pocket31 October 2011 at 23:58

    Beautifully sad! Well done!

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/30/wax-candy-lips/

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  4. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry1 November 2011 at 00:40

    this is fun, smart metaphor, wow.

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  5. Kremo1 November 2011 at 20:14

    Thank you, everyone !!!

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  6. Anonymous5 November 2011 at 16:07

    A great metaphor, nicely done

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  7. Laura Maria15 November 2011 at 09:45

    Magnificent as always. You do such an excellent job at conveying the emotion in your poems! The first two lines were my favorite.

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