Friday, 4 November 2011

Beyond The Horizon



If you could see beyond the horizon,
how far could you see my love,
how far would you see my love,
would you be able to see me here,
a hundred million miles away,
in a world
so different from your own...

'cause beyond the horizon
the sun never sets
but you are my sun
and all I've got this side is
a permanent darkness
my sun set a while ago ...


9 comments:

  1. masterful write.
    love the way your words make sense.

    :)

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  2. forever love,
    like the rising sun above.

    how wishful, sweet expression, well done.

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  3. o! how I know and understanding!! sad piece!
    happy gooseberry day!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/11/07/there-to-stay/

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  4. Hello.
    Your ending is so sad.
    All the best, my friend.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Heaven Is You

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  5. hopefully, the sun may rise tomorrow.

    smiles.
    fabulous poetry.

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  6. really expressive imagery..
    finding some gud poets via poetry palace
    i share similar poetry hobby~

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  7. amazing.

    poets rally week 56 is on.
    welcome in.

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  8. Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments !!!

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