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Friday, 4 November 2011

Beyond The Horizon



If you could see beyond the horizon,
how far could you see my love,
how far would you see my love,
would you be able to see me here,
a hundred million miles away,
in a world
so different from your own...

'cause beyond the horizon
the sun never sets
but you are my sun
and all I've got this side is
a permanent darkness
my sun set a while ago ...


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9 comments:

  1. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry5 November 2011 at 08:23

    masterful write.
    love the way your words make sense.

    :)

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  2. The Orange Tree6 November 2011 at 05:45

    forever love,
    like the rising sun above.

    how wishful, sweet expression, well done.

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  3. Anonymous6 November 2011 at 18:54

    keremos a Neruda ...!!

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  4. Anonymous8 November 2011 at 08:29

    o! how I know and understanding!! sad piece!
    happy gooseberry day!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/11/07/there-to-stay/

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  5. The Poet10 November 2011 at 04:33

    Hello.
    Your ending is so sad.
    All the best, my friend.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Heaven Is You

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  6. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Walton10 November 2011 at 23:25

    hopefully, the sun may rise tomorrow.

    smiles.
    fabulous poetry.

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  7. Rohit_blogger at http://floating-expressions.blogspot.in/11 November 2011 at 03:00

    really expressive imagery..
    finding some gud poets via poetry palace
    i share similar poetry hobby~

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  8. Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton 19 November 2011 at 01:37

    amazing.

    poets rally week 56 is on.
    welcome in.

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  9. Kremo21 November 2011 at 10:04

    Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments !!!

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