Monday, 28 November 2011

Lets dance

I say lets dance
you say lets talk
I took pains to learn
knowing how well you danced
but you say you dance no longer...
When I first saw you dancing
thought you were jumping about
maybe 'cause I couldn't hear the music..
Now that I'm in that place
my legs won't stop..
Why didn't I dance before?
..but I could only hear till so far..
and there were too many noises...
Will I always be running behind you?
hope we're running in circles
for when they overlap
we can talk all you want...


  1. So fabulous reading it once wasn't enough! The ending was especially great. I can really relate to the feelings in this.

  2. I feel like swirling and tapping my toes...the dance? Why didn't I dance before?

    I am no good dancer anyway, but your words made me feel like dancing!

  3. love this, missed you so much.

    How is your day?

    Time flies, appreciated your handsome inputs to our poetry picnic.

    Share a random poem today.
    Bless you.
    Happy December,
    Enjoy A Wonderful Wednesday Ahead.


  4. Thank you all for your wonderful comments !!!