Drifting down the river of thought
I reach a crucial fork,,
there is one who loves me
and one whom I love
Unable to choose, I fret for days
weighing against each other
the pros of both ways
but unable to move I am
Then I use another approach
First without her then you
I imagine a future epoch
weighing what I lose each time
And then my rivers coalesce
as frothing eddies turn blue
There never was a dilemma
and there never were two
'cause its you my darling
its always been you ...
I like the ending.
ReplyDeleteLoved the ending..
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ReplyDeletesweet, smart shifts of emotions,
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Lovely and very sweet thoughts. You are a lucky man my friend.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
Kremo, I like your ending "line". Would your poet have used it on the other as well?
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BTW, I'm starting reading now but I will count how many guys thought river and wrote 'love.'
You and I make two so far.
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After struggling as to who should you choose...I could only smile with the happy ending...And I like it that way, too!
ReplyDeleteI liked the twist... and right choice there.. thanks a lot for effectively using the prompt..
ReplyDelete@Harshad Mehta, @gautami tripathy, @Morning, @Melanie, @Ramesh Sood - Thank you all!.
ReplyDelete@Jim - My poet is an honest one and might not have :)
@Amity - Glad you think so too!
it is good to be the chosen in a river flowing...
ReplyDeleteHow lovely...there was never a dilemma...there was never two...only you...there is a beautiful flow to this piece :)
ReplyDelete@ms pie- I guess it must be!
ReplyDelete@Susie Clevenger - Thank you !