Monday, 17 October 2011

Fly my love

All this time that I thought
you were sailing away
you were silently dying
I didn't see, how I cry my love

You have bled much
but your heart beats strong
just hold on tight a moment
before long, I'll arrive my love

You shouldn't be like this
but save your soul I will
I'll make a deal with the devil
you belong, don't die my love

The world needs your pretty soul
though I won't be missed much
I'll lay my heart as a stepping stone
you deserve, go fly my love...


  1. How touching..the beauty of love's sacrifice..(wiping a few tears away)

  2. "I'll lay my heart as a stepping stone..." How beautiful and emotional!! Loved it. Blessings, Terri

  3. moving, love your kindness here.

    Happy Poetry Picnic.

  4. love your encouraging words on love.
    cool entry.

  5. Hello.
    I'm visiting from The Poetry Pantry.

    To sacrifice for touching & sincere.

    You penned this beautifully.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Bashful Lady

  6. Now this is beautiful.Real touching!!Selfless rare.

  7. what a touching poem filled with so much sacrifice

  8. Thank you so much everybody !!! Your comments are most appreciated !!!