By her belief
now the seas have parted
she means to walk across
'knowing' the walls will stay
while they look on
in disbelief...
But what she knows
is there's no sea
the land is, but dry
its the fear of drowning
that keeps them from
stepping forward...
Interesting poem and well written.
ReplyDeleteHere is my entry: http://www.jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/12/sorry-performance-poem.html
belief is key to see or block the truth at times...
ReplyDeletevery profound piece.
Fear keeps us from doing so much...nice work!
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