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Monday, 12 September 2011

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You whisper some things
ever so slightly
under your breath
and then go away
to come along some other day
like everything's still the same
and we keep moving
until you lean over
and start murmuring
something again
but I stop you and say,
I know darling
I remember
how could I possibly forget ...
I wrote it down in my heart ...



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10 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 September 2011 at 03:12

    how beautiful life can be ...



    daily athens

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  2. shail12 September 2011 at 11:29

    Beautiful.

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  3. Lisa at Greenbow12 September 2011 at 16:29

    Sweet.

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  4. Ramesh Sood12 September 2011 at 21:00

    Good one.. to keep writing on heart...I mean don't let the heart take all the weight of words.. pleeeeeeease..

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  5. Kremo12 September 2011 at 23:16

    Its not about grudges held up in some forsaken corner... rather, its about unprofessed love and the allusions to it that budding lovers make...

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  6. Kremo14 September 2011 at 00:04

    And thanks everyone for the kind words !

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  7. Anonymous15 September 2011 at 01:57

    romantic....beautiful!

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  8. Jingle Poetry At Olive Garden20 September 2011 at 01:06

    soft words.
    mind blowing imagery.

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  9. Jingle Poetry At Olive Garden20 September 2011 at 01:07

    welcome share your poetry talent with us this week.

    we are open until Thursday, 8pm.

    first time participant is encouraged to share random poems.

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  10. Kremo20 September 2011 at 11:13

    @The Gooseberry Garden - Thank you so much, will do !

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